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Thanks for fav

Thanks for the favorite, sweetie

thanks for the fav <3

 

Thank you for taking time to read my comic

Hello, sorry for my lateness for the IMHO task.

So, firstly from the character. I must say that Suellen is a interesting character. From the way she acts, her attitudes and also her style, she is unique. One thing that makes her more......real, I mean that she is just like human, having either good and bad attitudes, is when I know that she often swears, even with different languages. Well, we hardly expect a character without any flaw. But from that thing, the story won't get boring. Because we can know how the character reached the goals while the character must handle its weakness. Sometimes, I wonder how Sue interacts with people while she has that kind of bad habit.

Also, I appreciate your effort on creating the concept and settings of her. I can see your seriousness and consistency especially at the wardrobe task. You had tried to put details on how she dress.

Talking about the missing thing from your artwork. Well, I suggest that maybe you should find more references on body anatomy proportion. From the Anatomy task, I see that the body had been properly fleshed. But, the torso and the legs proportion seems odd.

Overall, you've done a great work on Suellen personality, as well as her story setting. I salute for your consistency and your efforts on that.

Maybe that's all. Sorry if there's some mistakes.